Friday, 29 May 2020

My Back

Today I was learning to describe and use a hook

I enjoyed writing about saturday night

I found it challenging to start my story

My digital learning object show I can copy and paste

next time i would change my story


My Back
On Saturday night our whole family drove to a friends house for a catch up also for dinner. We had pizza with chips while getting sprayed with the hose. Then running away from the water, we sprinted to the shed. After we all played in the shed, with the girls screaming bursting my eardrums, we ran to the garage door but the girls shut it on my back.

26.5.2020
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  1. Sarah29 May 2020 at 18:48

    Kia ora. I am Sarah from St Mary’s School.
    I really like what you wrote about in the order
    Made next time you could say how they shut the shed door on your back
    here

    Mā te wā
    Sarah

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