Thursday, 5 March 2020
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good job Logan I really like your blog post it is really good next time I try to add a full stop.
ReplyDeleteHi Logan i'm Caleb from tui whanau at kaingaroa i like your blog post next time add some spaces between your words so i can read them and don't mistake them for different words but it is so great.
ReplyDeleteSalaam my name is Masi from Waikowhai primary school in room Maunkau. I really liked how you described how the cookies look. It made me hungry. It reminded me about how we did the same writing in our classes. Maybe next time you could make your writing bigger because you have some space down below. What is your favorite biscuit mine is is chocolate biscuit they are so yummy.
ReplyDeletekiaora masi my name is logan my favourite biscuit is mint chocolate biscuit
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